Peer comments

Cinematography
-Appropriate lighting, camera movement was suitable for pace
-Bopping head too long
-Zooming a bit odd with signs
-Like the beginning
-Some shot a bit random
-Good variety of shots
-Shadows bit cool
-Little too much fan
-Needs more facial shots

Editing
-Transitions at wrong times at points
-Transitions and effects cool
-Visual and lyrics more relation to lights

Mise-En-Scene
-Car park roof was cool
-Shirt with X-mas lights was cool
-Bit random but good
-More locations
-Doesn't make sense in some bits
-Lots of different locations, some a bit odd
-Dancing WTF?

Genre Conventions
-Sort of raving a bit but no conventions really, (non conformist)
-Didn't conform to conventions
-Some slow shots seem to stick to convention

Whats Missing
-More shot variety
-Different locations and costumes
-Dancing wasn't needed because it wasn't relevent to music?
More:
-Lip syncing
-Variety