Teacher comments

Cinematography-
Mostly well framed. Innovative camera work eg. nodding camera movement is effective

Editing-
Some shots are too long and need to be edited into eg. initial shot of start

Mise-en-Scene
Mise en scene effective in terms of costume. Locations need to be more consistent eg. parts of the city. Love different feel to costume mise-en-scene.

Genre Conventions-
Factor of lighting with gels and 'dancing brand' the video so these should be introduced earlier, this would indicate the genre more clearly.

What's Missing-
At the moment, as you know, the features of the video seem unrelated in terms of genre.
The group need to be introduced clearly at the beginning.